January 8, 2011
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A Meaningless Poem
Abandoned. Forgotten.
Alone. Without hope.
Wandering aimlessly.
No way to cope.
Razors speaking
What my lips cannot.
My subconscious remembering
What my pain forgot.
This pain, again
I use to hide
The growing darkness
I feel inside.
I use this pain
As a way to escape
Surrounding myself
In bright caution tape.
For certainly here
A murder occurred:
For it’s been an eternity
Since my heart has stirred.
That which sustains me
Now trickles down
What keeps me alive
I pour on the ground
The One I’ve waited for
so longingly
Finally comes!
Tis Death: I’m free!
…
…
Eyes flicker open
Lighting surrounds
I’m still alive?
The fact astounds.
So evil, cruel Death
Still causes me strife
Forcing me on
In this meaningless life.
OhItWontBeForever challenged Xanga to write a poem they didn’t feel. So I did. I do not, nor have ever felt this way. Whaddya think?
Comments (19)
Wowzer. You did VERY well with this! It’s really good.
@puella_sapiens216 - Why thank you.
I’m glad you didn’t feel this.
It is a powerful poem.
Wow! It seemed you did feel those emotions. Keep this tucked away, b/c one day you will most likely experience similar feelings and then I suspect God will use it to teach you though it.
@C_L_O_G - Me too. I hope I never will.
@naphtali_deer - I plan on keeping it. I really do hope I don’t have to feel this, I know chances are I will, but God will help me through it.
Sounds like you would enjoy http://www.sadkermit.com. The songs are wonderful.
worth a rec!
@Roadkill_Spatula - Lol. I’ll head over there sometime then.
@hesacontradiction - Thanks!
not bad, not bad (;
@broknheartshurt - Thank you.
really really good man…………….I like it
@thejattstallion - Thank you
I’m really glad you sent this my way, albeit awfully late! XD
It was amazingly written. It flowed so nicely when I read it out. I loved it all. Well done.
@OhItWontBeForever - Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. I love it’s rhythm too, if I may be a bit vain lol.
Not at all! Anybody can appreciate a good poem, regardless who the writer may have been.
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