July 15, 2011
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Silver Flowers
Roses are red
Violets ain’t
Maybe they’re covered
In silver paint
Stealing the lining
Of my cloud
Cloaking all
In a mysterious cloud
Comprehending nothing
I understand all
Trying to piece together
Humpty Dumpty’s great fall
Waiting for my pegasus
Wanting to rise
Spread my wings
And take to the skies
But until that day
I’m stuck here below
Chained to a sinking ship
Passed rock bottom long ago
But I won’t let this
Rain on my parade
With my bright tinted glasses
I see through Life’s charade
Though fiery darts
At me are hurled
Still my banner
Of victory’s unfurled
I’ve battled my share of dragons
I’m well aware not all have fell
But many of those demons
I’ve sent straight back to Hell
Yet not through my own power
But through the power of His might
Helping me press on
Until the end of night
So even if, at times, my cloud
Seem silver-lining-less;
I can’t solve the mystery;
Or see through the smoke and mist;
I remember that my trust’s in Him
Who holds all strengths and powers
And every now and then I’ll stop
To smell those red and silver flowers
Comments (18)
I love this! I’m so happy that you posted it.
great work
Nice one, man!
I love this! and the title is so perfect and beautiful!
HUGS!
@Cestovatelka - Glad you like it
@godfatherofgreenbay - Thanks
@The_Eyes_Of_A_Painter - Why thank you
@AdamsWomanFell - Lol, thanks. HUGS BACK
nice job
@dmcx2010 - Thanks
Great poem!
@boricua_chic_2008 - Thanks!
@Like_A_Tigah - You’re welcome!
most excellent write!
@buddy71 - Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
Yet not through my own power
But through the power of His might
Helping me press on
Until the end of night
So even if, at times, my cloud
Seem silver-lining-less;
I can’t solve the mystery;
Or see through the smoke and mist;
I remember that my trust’s in Him
Who holds all strengths and powers
Amen! This is just what we need to be doing in those cloudy times – getting back to the sanctuary and fixing our eyes on Christ once again, just as the Psalmist did in Psalm 73.
@naphtali_deer - Funny you should mention that Psalm, I just did a devotion on it for a group of young men a few weeks ago, just before I wrote this poem.
@Like_A_Tigah -
Time in God’s Word is never wasted. Psalm 73 is what I call the remedy for the rant.
@naphtali_deer - I love that name lol!
I enjoyed this mucho. Good work holmes.
@ringothepirate - Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!