January 16, 2012
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The Sound of…
The loudest sound I’ve ever heard
Still echoes through my mind
I’ve tried so hard to drown it out
But a louder sound, I cannot find.
Like a shot out of a canoon,
It shoots through my ear;
Bouncing around inside my head:
No other sound can I hear.
It is the deafening roar of a hurricane,
Though it started as a gentle rain.
What was once the hum of a buzzing fly
Is now the thundering of a freight train!
It has turned my world upside-down,
It’s shattering my eardrum!
There’s not a thing I can do about it
Though I know where it comes from.
For long ago, this sounds source
Left and went away.
Now this noise keeps me up at night,
And distracted during the day.
Though not a single word she utters,
She’s screaming in my ear.
Now forever I must suffer:
For the sound of silence is all I hear.
Comments (8)
I like this ! Reminds me of something I read once called “The Music Of The Night” Its all about a sound at night. Not many can hear it. Its like a harmony or a tune that can be heard, but no one is quite sure where its coming from. They say that those lucky one who hear this mystfying tune are the chosen ones and one day will come together to play in a celestail rock n roll band. If this is true, I sure as hell hope they have a good singer like Mike Jagger.
I really like this! I really like the style of the growing font, then ending with tiny font. Nicely done.
Yay, Tigah is writing again!
WOW! I like this a lot. It flows so nicely. Beautiful. Great Job! ^_^
@The_Eyes_Of_A_Painter - Hm, sounds interesting. Yes, a killer lead vocalist is a must lol
@Cestovatelka - Why thank you. (And I didn’t stop writing, just blogging.
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@making_a_comeback_05 - Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
I like it, great work
@godfatherofgreenbay - Thanks!
I really love this!
And how you “formatted” it is cool!
HUGS!
@AdamsWomanFell - Thanks! Yeah, the idea came to me right before I clicked submit lol.